Screenplay & Manuscript Critiques

FEEDBACK CAN MAKE ALL THE DIFFERENCE IN THE WORLD.

How much would you benefit from an honest, objective and thorough critique of your project?

Why You Need It

  • You want to make sure your completed project is as good as it can be BEFORE you submit it to that agent, publisher or producer. You only have one chance to make a good first impression.
  • You have a finished project that you've been submitting, but it doesn't seem to be getting traction. You don't know why no one seems interested.
  • You've taken it as far as you can take it, but now you need help. You know there's something wrong, but you don't know what it is, or more importantly, how to fix it.
 

OUR CRITIQUE SERVICE CAN HELP!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

        What You Get

 

  • Zena Dell Lowe will provide a thorough evaluation of your completed screenplay or manuscript in the areas of story structure, character arc, character development, craft and artistry, visual storytelling, writer strengths and challenges, and more.
     
  • Your screenplay or manuscript will be returned to you with notes and comments in the margins (depending on your submission format), so you’ll know specific areas you need to address.
     
  • Best of all,  each critique comes with a two-hour phone consultation with Zena, who will walk you through your story step by step. She'll explain what works, what doesn’t, and give you clear, no-nonsense guidance. So even if your story is not yet ready for publication or production, you’ll know exactly what you need to do next.

 

THE STORYTELLER’S MISSION CHANGING THE WORLD FOR THE BETTER. THROUGH STORY.

How You Get It

 

Manuscript Critiques:

COST: $1349 for manuscripts up to 80,000 words

For Manuscripts longer than 80,000 words, add $100 per 10,000 words

Screenplay Critiques:

COST: $749 for scripts up to 120 pages

For screenplays longer than 120 pages, add $3 per page

 

Select an option below to start the process! 

Screenplay Critiques

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Manuscript Critiques

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Take a Moment to Read These Amazing Testimonials

     “Whenever I’m writing something new, the first person I call for advice and insight is Zena. Whatever the genre or project, her ideas match the material so well, it’s impossible to imagine the final product taking shape without her help.”  

 ~Tamir Rawlings

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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"THERE'S NO BETTER WAY FOR AN ARTIST TO GROW THAN TO GET QUALITY FEEDBACK FROM SOMEONE WHO KNOWS HOW TO GIVE IT."
Zena Dell Lowe, The Storyteller's Mission

 

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